It is a cold afternoon in December. Pete stands on a hill with his sister Nicky. Nicky looks down from the hill, they decide to go to the Upton-on-Meade and past the night. They go to a bed and breakfast. One night two men goes up to the attic and one man drops a book. Nicky reads a book and discover that the secret room is in the garden near the water. They go to the garden and pull the hand. Nicky runs down the steps and pulls the stone man. They find the secret room. The room it’s fool the gold and silver. The tree men rob the box full of coins.
divendres, 4 d’abril del 2008
THE SECRET OF OLDSTONE HALL
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Hi guys!
Here are some mistakes you must correct:
1) Cross out 'the' before 'Upton-on-Meade'
2) ...two men go... (not: two men goes)
3) Nicky reads a book and discorvers (with s!!!)
4) The room is full of... (not 'it's fool')
And that's it!
bye for now
Carme
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